Wednesday, June 2, 2010

Opinion Time

I need your input on which poem, (two versions of the same poem), you like better. They are essentially the same just with a different layout.

The First:
God Only Knows

God only knows the pain
God only knows the secrets
God only knows the sorrow
God only knows

God only knows who did it
God only knows why they did it
God only knows how it will end
God only knows

God only knows how to help
God only knows who can help
God only knows who will touch me
God only knows

God only knows who I will touch
God only knows how I can help
God only knows where I am
God only knows

The Second:
God Only Knows

God only knows
The pain
The secrets
The sorrow

God only knows
Who did it
Why they did it
How it will end

God only knows
How to help
Who can help
Who will touch my life